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Senses (working title)

To see the world through eyes not mine
To see the beauty within thine sky

To feel the world through hands benign
To feel the magic begin to defy

To hear the world through ears refined
To hear the sounds of earth reply

To taste the world through buds divine
To taste the sweet taste of thy

To speak of worldly things do i decline
To chatter of things that no longer apply

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not finnished yet, but i was just posting what i have thus far to get feedback and the like.

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