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You

Every time I try to write something new
My thoughts go back to you
And everything you put me through,
What you did and made me do.
I don't want to waste another word on you,
Don't want to think about how my heart flew
Back when I didn't have a clue.
You said so many things - which were true?
I loved you; did you really love me too?
Or was it another lie to spew?
I guess I never should have trusted you.
I wouldn't have had my heart torn in two
Or felt so sick, as if I had the flu.
Why don't you understand I'm through?
I deserve so much better than you.
So now it's time to say "adieu"
And I can begin my life anew.
These are the last words I'm wasting on you.

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I hate that the poems I am most content with are the ones about him.

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  • Clearing The Mist
    November 16
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    Gawd girl i know how that feel!!!
    Me and my bff agreed guys think with their penis or lack there of lol!!
    your really good by the way.

  • fuck him.

    boys suck.

    really.

    AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. i miss you. and i wish that i was better at remembering to call people cuz i really want to hang out with you.

    but like....you go back to college soon.

    anyway, that poem was good. great rhyming. good flow. and emotion.

    love you. always<3


  • PhadraigMcShane
    August 10
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    HE FAILS.

    Oh Sonya.

    Hopefull a distracting weekend in Boston will cure you of him.

    I love you babe, and i always will.

    No lie.

    <3

  • this is really good. keep writing you're doing really good

  • this is amazing and i am completly feeling all of these things rite now...i was thinking about writing something like this...i guess you wrote it for me....keep writing

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