Shallow is this lonley breath
so sad are the whispers
sorrow has left this frightful place
yet pain it all but lingers
Crying such a prior engagment
to laughing at nothing at all
madness is circling those shadows
swallow that lonley shallow breath
To much time remains fasting
to much heavy burden here
to many incoherent callings
to many tears now spent
At last the shallow breath... breathes
the whispers once again.... smile
sorrow remained a past... memory
now pain has all but.... left
is there anyway to improve on this
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WONDERFUL!!!!!
Sadly nothing but time can take the heartache and sorrow away.
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It is a melancholy of the lonleness...very sad piece.
It was a pleasure to read and ponder. So much emotions and sorrow...
Great piece
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