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feelings

shivers down my spine,
heat in my cheeks.
chills that run,
from my fingertips
straight down to my toes.
my hair stands up.
a smile breaks free.
my eyes shine.
i'm in love.

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a 2 minute write! enjoy! =D=D

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  • Synraven silver member
    January 25
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    Love...Oh tell me about it. I'm in a love-hate relationship with it. You think its the greatest thing in the world at one point, and then at the other end of the spectrum it's just the most frustrating game ever played. Hopefully it's the former for you. Short and effective, keep writing!


  • Elvenfairy
    August 18, 2009
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    lol so that is what love feels like? I felt that once, but I thought it was cooties. lol just kidding.


  • condor gold member
    August 1, 2009

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    Ahhh, so so sweet, and i can very well picture this shy person standing there wondering what on earth he is going to do next. Although a very short write as you have said in your notes....2 minutes, it certainly spoke much about how love feels and that tingling we all feel at the moment of realization.