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feelings

shivers down my spine,
heat in my cheeks.
chills that run,
from my fingertips
straight down to my toes.
my hair stands up.
a smile breaks free.
my eyes shine.
i'm in love.

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a 2 minute write! enjoy! =D=D

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  • Elvenfairy
    August 18
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    lol so that is what love feels like? I felt that once, but I thought it was cooties. lol just kidding.


  • condor gold member
    August 1

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    Ahhh, so so sweet, and i can very well picture this shy person standing there wondering what on earth he is going to do next. Although a very short write as you have said in your notes....2 minutes, it certainly spoke much about how love feels and that tingling we all feel at the moment of realization.