Every melody,
Every note,
Takes me farther away from the pain.
Each line I sing,
Sets me free,
And takes me away from reality.
Without song,
My world is incomplete.
A polyphony with only four voices;
A duet sung by a soloist.
Lonely,
Heartbreaking,
And unbearable.
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very nice write
the music of two souls is a beautiful thing... wonderful job... -
interesting.... not the best flowing write i've read, but it was quite interesting to read.
i especially like the first two stanzas. They are the two that i was able to compare to. AWESOME!
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WOW!
Awesome write!! I so agree, love the ending! A duet sung by a soloist.... brilliant!!
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Nice.
Very professionally written. It sounds deep, smart and I love the way it flows and how it ends. Great job, and thanks for entering.
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humz.. you know what to write, how to write, then write more.. show your more expressions
you can have a great ddeal
keep writing
by
the poet of hearts and beautiful words
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I really liked this piece!! great job and good luck!
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Awesome wording here in this piece. I liked this bit...
"Without song,
My world is incomplete.
A polyphony with only 4 voices;"
Probably beacause of the word polyphony.....love that word. Awesome work here! Thanks so much for the share! -
beautiful
this is beautiful, sad and wonderful a very nice piece.
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This is fabulously beautiful, music really is an escape from everything else. I'd rather it be music than a form of self affliction for people. It had a definite beginning and ending, you left nothing unanswered. Great work (:
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music provides such sweet escape for so many. I can't imagine a world without it. I like the passion this piece evokes when reading it. thank you for sharing. keep up the great work!! peace and light, kp
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