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...l u ll aby and a candle...

You cant drive forever...
the problems only getting worse from here
and not a day goes by....
where im not left wondering why

time cant last forever
3 days or fucking weeks
and where i come from you cant drive off in the rain...

beauty is phantom...
its always gonna be there and then puff
its gone...again...
its gone....again...
its gone...
its gone-

so smile at the world
your eyes are the moon
your teeth are the stars
and you make the sky swoon
I'll be here forever
however you wish...
I'll love you forever...
no matter the tricks...
how honestly covered
in my arms you'll be...
safe here to shelter
wherever i sing...
this song...

all of heavens feathers...
couldn't hold you like i do
and all of this worlds problems
cant touch you...
my baby here are my hugs...
this is truth and yes you know
i will always hold you...
no matter what the snow...
so please just hold a candle...

so smile at the world
your eyes are the moon
your teeth are the stars
and you make the sky swoon
I'll be here forever
however you wish...
I'll love you forever...
no matter the tricks...
how honestly covered
in my arms you'll be...
safe here to shelter
wherever i sing...
this song...

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  • Arjita gupta
    July 30

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    Great poem...touching and grants the feel from heart.

    loved this stanza...added a whole lot of meaning to the already wonderful poem:

    so smile at the world
    your eyes are the moon
    your teeth are the stars
    and you make the sky swoon
    I'll be here forever
    however you wish...
    I'll love you forever...
    no matter the tricks...
    how honestly covered
    in my arms you'll be...
    safe here to shelter
    wherever i sing...
    this song...


  • Ms Lilcupid
    July 30
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    I agree the word fucking is just a little too much lol


  • Kendal Palmer gold member
    July 30

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    ahhh...i use my artistic license as often as I need to!! you should to. sometimes we need strong language in order to get the exact feeling across that we are aiming for...that's art for ya!! I like this poem. it is raw, real and completely valid!! keep up the great work. thank you for sharing. peace, kp


  • shattered.frisco
    July 30
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    it woulda been a lot better without the word fucking in the beginning.


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