no more words that can be spoken
no more words left in the open
no more songs left to sing
no more songs can this life bring
no more pain left for you and i
no more pain i'm ready to die
no more smiles to grace this mouth
no more smiles to hang about
well i like it ....whatcha think!?!
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simply sad
you seem exhausted in this work, just tired of lifes bullshit, i can relate. a very clear message. with good rythm, my only critic is that it feels unfinished. is this on purpose? to leave room for hope?
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yes i think your the only one who got that. even tho your on the ground you can still find the will to get back up
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No more dreams to send in hopes of catching a relentless echo?
They're forever you know?
Excellent work!
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Give me three guesses to figure out who this is about. I bet I'll get it right on the first try.
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your on girly and you shall get it right
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This is well written, and sad. Beautiful and dark. I really like this write a lot. The flow was amazing, and It really screamed with emotion. I truly loved it. I hope you are doing alright. All the best.
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This was very well written. I like how you wrote it. Keep up your great work.
TwiztidMaggot ♥
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...short and at the point...a little bit too sad....sometimes life really gives us the finger...sad but true
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