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can it make it on it own

Can it make it
Can it make it trew time
How is it gonna survive
With no ruets to stand in
No sun to feed it
No person to love it
Can it make on its own
No dirt to grow on
Is it possible
So sensible

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  • delightfulmess silver member
    September 2

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    i love brevity and this had an interesting unexpected twist... love those
    Well done and thank you for your entry in my contest and also for you patience .


    Delila


  • kathykool
    July 30
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    i like it but next time use the spell check
    ruets= roots
    trew= through