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In Life (Haiku)


Trees bring forth new buds
        soft winds blow, through sunshine skies --
              nature basks in life.

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  • Melee Vau gold member
    September 10

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    such a beautiful picture in so few words. don't you love the discipline of Haiku?

  • goldfishboy
    July 30

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    I think that this poem uses great imagery. You might want to enter it into a contest that allows prewrites. keep up the good work.
    PS. you might want to consider making a haiku chain.


  • individuality gold member
    July 30

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    a good poem, it feels a little like spring now, lots of rain though it is summer, but i am liking the rain right now as we just had a mini heatwave! aye spring is a good time, all the fresh life popping up and dancing.