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Sing of Spring (Haiku)



Sun shines playfully
      tender buds reach for the sky
                        new life sings of Spring.




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  • annother gold member
    September 21

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    Beautiful Haiku. I especially love your 7 syllable line, the imagery in it is lovely.

  • goldfishboy
    July 30

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    this is a very nice season haiku. There are several contests that cater to poems like this one and i would suggest that you try entering it into one.