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Spring Afternoon (Haiku)



Warm spring afternoon
      robin hopping in my yard -
            worm darts in his hole!


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  • AbundantBetrayals
    September 16
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    This was really nice robins do mark the coming of spring well done

  • Topnotchsy
    July 30

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    Very cute write here. I like the imagery. As they say, "the early bird gets the worm, but the early worm gets caught." Nice three line write.

  • J Macabre gold member
    July 30

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    Hehe that was pretty cute actually. This was a pretty nifty 3 liner. I could see it all happening. Good job.