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Spring Breeze (haiku)



sunshine streaming down
      soft breeze whistles through the trees;
              leaf rides on wind's wings



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  • Tqop
    September 14

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    Wow! Brilliant job. I really enjoyed the last line. It was very creative.

  • Topnotchsy
    July 30

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    Beautiful imagery here. The poem did evoke more of an Autumn feel for me than Spring, but that's just me. I just immediately relate leaves falling off trees to the Fall, but there's no reason this can not be a picture of Spring as well.

  • ElectricBloom
    July 30

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    aw i love this.
    it's so beautiful!
    you create such gorgeous imagery in so few words and the overall picture of the piece is lovely. well done, this is excellently written, i really enjoyed reading it.

    ElectricBloom