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Splashing Dog (Tanka)



Great drops of water
    fly vigorously from him!
Black hair glistening
    he gallops through the river,
    stops only to shake himself!

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  • J Macabre
    July 30

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    A puppy! This is a nice 5 liner here...pretty amazing how an animal can touch ones heart so deeply. I used to have pets but they were taken away...by an evil person. Great...tanka its called?