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Oblivion

No sight, No sound, No feeling
Oblivion
No fears, No dreams, No tears
Oblivion
No successes, No failures, No dissapointments
Oblivion
No strengths, No weaknesses, No doubts
Oblivion
No heartaches, No heart breakes, No preasures
Oblivion
No cares, No worries, No stresses
Oblivion
No loveloss, No hate, No pain
Oblivion

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  • sgking123 gold member
    November 6

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    wow

    deep and deep ....into the abysss..loved this one... I have few on my page that would make ya feel about thesame


  • Lola Lola
    July 30

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    this reminds me of the feeling i get being completely absorbed in something im doing, or making. ;-)
    very awesome!


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    July 29

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    The ending sounds like paradise no hate and no pain. very good write Misty love you honey. Love Auntie