Breezes
Flowers swaying
Butterflies float grandly
Spider webs delicate lacey
Fragrance of my garden a daily treat
Hummingbirds zoom from plant to plant
Praying Mantis on guard
Lizards tails sway
Breezes
Author notes
word: breezes
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So very, very lovely... breezes an exceptionally poetical word an excellent form superbly executed! Wonderful!!
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Lovely
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simply beautiful
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Little reminders of the beauties of nature, of summer and the simple things in a garden. I haven't seen a praying mantis in years, they were always such unique insects. Nicely written!
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did you center align? The shape seems a bit off kilter ... the syllable count is correct but as I said, the shape is off. Try center aligning.
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Image packed rictameter gives the reader much to ponder, very nice.
Dennis
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Very well done
My best wishes.
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very lovely i can see your hummingbirds and butterfly's going from flower to the next one
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