They called us crazy when we were in our teens
Just chasing each other in the heated rain
That's the thing about hot Georgia and a dream
Twenty years later they call us in love today
I remember the sweet taste of rain on your lips
I still love you now just like I loved you back then
You will always be the temptation that I can't resist
It's everyday that I fall in love with you over and over again
You will be the treasure guarded safely in my heart
I'm so happy that you became my lively world
Every time the clouds form and that first drop starts
It makes me proud to call you my beautiful rain girl
Author notes
This contest is prompted by the song 'Georgia Rain'
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u7Ebrxk-uQE&feature=related
Picture found on contest
Below is another poem about the rain in Georgia;
http://allpoetry.com/poem/5459129
A contest entry
- Let it rain by Silent Cougar.
875 points, ended August 5, 3 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Am certain there is some special girl out there who just loves the rain.
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aww This is so very romantic so genuine and truly very very sweet I love this write its absolutely beautiful!!!!
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You are like almost the sweetest guy alive. I'm forced to say almost by the fact that I am married (of course to the sweetest guy alive) and I am sure RayniDayz will also disagree, as will any gal with a significant other lol. But you get the message. You are such a sweet, sexy gentleman, who I am blessed to have as a best friend
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OMGosh, what a touching and blessid comment to and for me as it leaves me with such a grand feeling
Ted E
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Just beautifully soft & sensual so full of romance
and one that has lasted a life time...You have done it again in the rain
making your readers check the weather......Novy
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Thank you so much for always leaving such wonderful commentsTed E
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Well without wishing too hard, I hope it rains in a certain part of Georgia when I'm there, then maybe I'll get to find the senses mentioned for real. This one has a really soft feel to it, a warming feel giving off the love that is held tight, and given life by that first drop of the storm,, remembered from days past and still held sweetly. Thank you for entering and best of luck.
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No matter where you are when it rains, I do hope you get to enjoy that passion with another that comes from the rain and thank you for such a wonderful comment
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Awe, I loved this!
And how true your words are.
It is so hot here in Georgia!
It's still 80 degrees at 11:00 pm at night.
You really know how to describe the the rain!
-Mandi
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Thank you for your lovely comment and I just have a passion for the rain and for the ways I get to look at it from other inspirations
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