Leaving on a trip today
Going to China
I reopen my suitcase
Only to find, everything has vaporized
And replacing my clothing
Has become an enchanted wonderland
Yes, it surprised me, too
There was this woman
Looking lost
And all around her was a forest
Dappled with autumn leaves
And then there was a trail
But it lead to nowhere
How...inconvenient
I try talking to her, to help her out
But she won't listen
I guess she isn't real
So I must start digging to China
Since my suitcase has decided to become some place for daydreamers
Met you there?
Author notes
7-29-09
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http://dezera.deviantart.com/art/Imagination-36324625
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Comments
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Wonderful, the wording is so smooth ^_^
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WOW
What first struck me about this poem was how creative it was. I really enjoyed reading it and I sincerely hope that you make more poems like this in the future.
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