Dancing under a moonlit sky
you pull me closer, and ask me why
why I feel the things I do
why couldn't I just tell you
You asked before if I've felt lost
well I feel lost everyday
in thoughts and visions and screams in my head
with reminders of those who wish I were dead
You asked if I've loved
and I replied no, but I've always loved you it seems
but its that love I cannot show
except for when I dream
It seems that tables have been turned
and I stand in your similar situation
but you had the courage and strength to let go
while I lack in determination
Sometimes I dream we have these talks
although I can't hear what we say
you always smile
in that sparkled way... giving me butterflies
You asked before if I've felt confused
well I feel confused everyday
for I don't know where I went wrong with you
I just know that its my fault
Its not my disease that makes me believe
the horrible things in my head
or the people, who so often, wish I were dead
it's the true fact that I push and I run, and I put up these guards
that so often are just never won
You asked me before if I missed you
every single day
Please tell me what you think
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i like this alot its really nice. and i think the flow is changed alot but it was still really easy to read for me. i kno how this is...it sucks. i really am like the same way i think so i kno wats happening to you. like i make alot of mistakes too and sometimes i think everyone has an issue with me but then when i look at it im the one with that issue with myself. be careful about that bc you might get really depressed when the only one who is insecure about you is you. feel better about urself love and you will almost certainly feel like people love you back. <3
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You are 100 percent right! I am the one with the issue on me.. sadly people actually have said they wished I were dead, so that part is .. true. I just go through life trying not to let those kinds of comments get to me, because then I do start getting depressed. It sucks!
Thanks so much for being so understanding, and commenting on my work.
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Seems such a simple, yet such an honest expression. It is a difficult thing, that I understand...
OH, I disagree though that it's your fault, I just can't see it, even though you may push away and/or run away, I would hope that those would be small obstacles in the wake of true love and feelings...and I also can't imagine anyone wishing you were dead...who could be so cold hearted and cruel to wish that upon someone who just doesn't deserve it at all!
♥
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Too many people!
Thank You for commenting! I love coming back to see if you've read my work, and commented.
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Touching and very true here, the things inside you and just how it is to explain and put it into words, just to make them understand...
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