\Together/ they sit in
-S-i-l-e-n-c-e-,
She and her
L o n e l y friends
Neatly l|i|n|e|d up
In a paper [[carton]].
O.n.e. at a time
She takes one out,
**Lighting** it with a /match/,
^Hoping^ to leave her
:Worries: behind
In a (((shroud)) of
G
l
o smoke.
o
m
y
Author notes
i'm now officially in love with dirtypretty
A contest entry
- Dirty Pretty by AbidoodleCullen.
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Comments
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I like it a lot (:
Thanks for entering and good luck!
~Abi
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to ur author notes-me to
this was so nicely done. very vivid with the imagery.
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You are officially amazing at dirty pretty. You're one of the best dirty pretty writers I've seen, hands down.
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