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how im doing

I bet your wondering how I 'am
how i moved on since you've been away
your probably thinking i still want you
that i still dream of you
that your face still lingers in my head
as a matter of fact
i still want you....as far away from me
i still dream of you.......lying on your face in the cold, dead and alone
your face always lingers in my head.....as the poor example of a man
so that's how im doing since you've been away
couldn't care less if your dead or alive

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