Shhh, I have a secret,
but don't tell a soul,
keep it between me and you,
you won my heart,
you won my soul,
you won my love.
Shhh, I have a secret,
don't you tell a soul,
keep it locked up inside,
I'll pick you up, if you fall
I'll hold you when the teardrops fall
I'll love you when the sky is blue, and gray too.
I'll love you when you need me most,
and even when you don't.
I'll love you forever and for always,
but shhh, don't tell a soul,
it's a secret.
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For Someone~
I love you..
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Ditto.
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That was a pretty secret. I'm glad I got to read it.
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what lovely mystery is love between two shared,
not caring for the world's opinions, too busy just enjoying the intimacy of two, lovely write as always.~~~Artis
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Beautiiful..... It was sooooooo nice.... ou pen beautifully sis... as always
Lots of love and
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My
and the secret shall stay. In precious moments words and deeds can be even more glorious. And let it be .
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awww this is so sweet, it is so , you...
all your poetry has a special part of you within it.
your heart shines through on this piece. i can tell
that it has your soul packed in every single word.
loveandblessings2u & yours always
your twin
joyce
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sometimes secrets are nice ... until they build up and make us want to scream. Nice job.
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That is true honey, but this secret, well....... it is a continuation of others that i have done, and brought the sequel full circle now
and yes, i do have a secret, and the unveiling will be in a few more weeks
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Wow~
Gosh I wonder if the Special Someone knows
if he does not...then ...
we can just keep it a Secret
Love this and the Mystery surrounding...
so since You told the Secret to me...
are ya gonna have to kill me too
Thank You for sharing Your Secret
Best wishes in all You do
with love & light~ Desire~*~
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No, I will let you live, but you have to promise to keep the secret
But I think you will, so no worries
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OH MY GOSH! See the other day I was trying to write a poem like that but I just couldn't do it. Instead I wrote this poem that was way different than I wanted it to be. I really liked it and it was stupendous good. Wonderful job couldn't have done it better.
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mmmmmmmmmmmm.....someone is in love...this is a great poem.....i love it
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awe...
This was great!!
I know all about keeping those secrets
I know i had to keep a secret held for a little while
but it just had to be told and now it's out in the open.
I loved this Nye!!
& *Heart*
Mandi
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Beautiful! I love how you keep it a secret, as though you're waiting for a big reveal - and I can picture it right now! I love how happy you sound recently, and I'm so so glad that you've got this lovely secret you can write about, and that you've invited us to share your private joys
Luv ya
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its sweet and beautiful
is this who i think its about ?
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And who do you think it is about?
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beautiful mommy
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its so sweet. i loved it, but why would you want to keep it a secret? very well written
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I don't want to keep it a secret, I want to shout it from the mountain top. This is just a continuation of a thought of what I told him this morning.
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