Look at life
through outside eyes
Always on the edge.
Outside looking in.
Fascination
Desperation
Irritation
in this place.
New
yet old
no sense
*forgotten* ...
frustration.
Eternity
my
mystery...
... and so I wander.
Comments
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the spacing gave the feeling of disconnectedness. (is that really a word? it is now!) excellent!
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Very interesting and creative, I like it.
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Wow, this is AWESOME! I love the style and format of this, it has a sense of mystery to it that I'm completely in love with! Amazing work (: Keep writing!
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