~Goodbye~
It's the little things that make you cry
The hardest times are living our memories with him
Teaching him what you taught me
You helped me break my chains and then tied me to you
And you couldnt love me enough to stop
How's that fair?
It wont be easy to start over
Because he'll never be you
I just need you to tell me goodbye
Author notes
An older poem. Posted for Hills. GRR!!@
What did you think
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Nice
I love this...
Its really simple, but really touching.
XD
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AAAWWW
its sad but your great sissy i love your poems keep up the good work
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damn
very sad
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Thanks for the applause.
Yes, it is a very emotional time in ones life. Thanks for the compliment.
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Wow
I like this... is that strange to say? I feel your pain as I read it. Like your sitting down with me and telling me... I hope things have gotten better since you wrote this? -
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*Sigh*
Ha ha. This is so old, and crappy. Before I really learned how to write. And, I'm glad you like it though. I'm sorry if you can relate. And not really too much better. -
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-frowns patting your back and offering a hug- Care to say?
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No, I'm okay. Thank you though. :3
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I am not sure how old this poem is but it is really good. I know that someone can read this and it will make them think. If they are going through this and maybe be strong enough to pull away from the pain. SH
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Thank You Very Much!
This is a little older, before I really got into poetry. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I thank you personally for taking the time to read, comment, and applaud. I hope it helps in some way shape or form, for that is why I write. I look forward to reading your work.!
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Ummm...This is amazing. Absolutely amazing!
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Thank You So Much!
I tried. This is one of those simplicity poems. Saying only what needs to be said. Not really my style but to the point. I appreciate it
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awww hunny this is so sad... so moving its beautiful
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Oh my.
I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you
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awww sissy this i sreally sad and i can relate to it.
It's an amazing piece and really well written.
It made me think alot.
Love you sissy
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Thank you!!!
Thank you for taking the time to read it and comment. :]. This piece was a hard one for me to write. I was torn. But I think in writing this I realized I was putting someone on a pedistool and making them a god when in reality they were a demon in need of a justification for their damned existance. I love you too
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Welcomes
I like your words for that Yer dont make people Gods when in reality they need to be put in there place and knocked over
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I learned that the hard way.
It's a very complicated disasterpiece. I mean, in my eyes he deserved it....but I know in reality he didnt.
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I can really relate to this piece at the moment =/
It fits me perfectly.
Great write
I really love this, it makes me feel something.
Sadness maybe.
Keep writing
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Thank You! XD!
I'm sorry you can relate. I wouldn't wish this on anyone. I know this pain all to well. I really appreciate you reading it. And dont forget I'm here if you need anything!!!
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Thanks You too.
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we all need closure when moving on in our lives. you have captured this moment so completely in the words to this piece!! thank you for sharing. keep up the great work. good luck!! peace and light
KP
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Why Thank You!
I'm actually surprised you liked it. I've read some of your work, and you far surpass anything I could conjure up. But thanks just the same. I appreciate it. Closure is a matter of mind of matter when you someone steals the essence of your being. But thanks again.
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