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ocean eyes

i've often found
the sea,
so perpetually blue
to be freckled
with green;
whiter at the tips of waves
darker in its mysteries

it puzzles me when you say
that you've never seen
the ocean

i am reminded daily
when i peek
inside your irises--
salt water caught and held
forever swirling in each orb
like swirls in a marble

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  • Obani
    July 29
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    Oh, cool. very pretty metaphor