I come to your house in the middle of the night
Barges into you bedroom and turns on the light
No point in hiding, I know that your here
Ill looks me in the eyes and smile at your fear
Grabbing you by the shoulders and pulling you out of bed
Throws your to the floor and kicks you in the head
You struggle to you feet, but before you say a word
I tell you not to bother screaming 'cos It'll never be heard
I put a rope around youd neck and pulls it tight
You try your best to kick hme, but your too numb to fight
You struggle in a panic but can't get away
Ive been telling you for years that I'd kill you one day
I'm tightening the noose up, ignoring your pleas
Your strength has all left you, and you fall to your knees
Beg me for mercy, That you don't want to die
Im sneering in derision at seeing you cry
You try screaming for help but your throat is too sore
You fall to the ground, You can't fight anymore
I leave you there cold with the rope round your throat
And lying beside you, your suicide note.
Eh...whateve
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Dig it, the morbid thoughs of a strong man! Very scary personally, buut, I understand the will. The most most visual:"No point in hiding, I know that your here
Ill looks me in the eyes and smile "....Interesting read. -
Dig it, the morbid though of a strong man! Very scary personally, buut, I understand the will. The most most visual:"No point in hiding, I know that your here
Ill looks me in the eyes and smile "....Interesting read. -
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Wow, you're such an amazing writer. I feel that same way sometimes. -
myyy eyyes burn !
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nice write matte. lovely and dark.
its actually the first dark poem iv gotten to read all summer...gd first taste lol
keep up the awesome writing!!!!
-Dani
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mm i love this poem. dark poems call to me but this is truely amazing. your a truely amazing poet. well done.
J.J.S -
dark and delicious, Matteh
i love the maliciousness of this,yet the cleverness as well <3 brilliant work
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awesome
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Magnificent.
This was an outstanding write. Very captivating and empowering. I think you did a phenomenal job capturing what all our sub consious surrender to in our darkest hours. Brava.
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This is pretty good. there are a few errors in spelling... "youd" "your" and "hme" "me" Very nice work though otherwise. I like it. Keep up your great work!
TwiztidMaggot -
A couple spelling mistakes and I thought I found spaces where you might have been missing a word
but other than that its good
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