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We are together

After flying all around the world
I have failed to find my love
I was so unsafe about my heart
At the end i found my dove

I still remember the day when
We just got to know each other
I was always keen to be her man
She took time know me better

Look at us now even after twenty years
When others having trouble with lover
With lots of pains and eyes full of tears
We are still together and young forever

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All the credit goes to 'sOuL'

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  • sonia 77
    August 9
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    nice ,nice,nice !!!!

  • Jade-30
    August 8

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    This is an awesome poem. Very romantic and nicely written. I really like it and the flow too.
    Jade


  • Sharon Marie gold member
    August 5

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    so sweet

    I just love your touching words so very beautiful and well meaning
    Blessing's!
    Sharon Marie

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    July 31
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    Thank you for your beautiful show of love, good luck in my contest, Josie


  • Metalchica
    July 30
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    this is a really good poem you put it together real well


  • x-evil cupid-x
    July 30

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    This was a wonderful peice, rhytme went well, and it seems like you wanted to get some rhyme in...but kinda gave up on the idea.

    Well done - Evil cupid


  • blackfang4318 gold member
    July 29

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    very well

    wow this great i love it and this is nice to
    read i love the first line of the poem and
    wow this so dog gone good this was a very well writen
    poem and i wish to read more from you like this


  • babygirl2582 silver member
    July 29
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    Beautiful...


  • ShaShay
    July 29

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    Nicely done write. I suggest you check the spelling and grammerin a few places. Read it as it's written not justas you know it was suppossed to be done. We all have this problem at times. Just read each word as it is and not with your minds eye.
    This is a lovely simile.
    Sharon


  • naturaldefeatest
    July 29

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    I was always keen to her man? or I was always keen to be her man? you might want to add the 'be' there, otherwise you are saying you want not her but to have the man that she has as bf.

  • sOuL
    July 29

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    Wow what a nice poem. I like the way you have expressed the whole thing. I wish you all the best of luck for the contest. I really loved that you have compared and well pictured about today's lovers, who keep changing their love and mind.

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