There's a special place we can go
It's an explorable place of dreams
And a wonderment beyond belief
Its somewhere few will seek
And virtue will supercede all evil.
It's a hidden oasis of truth
And a tangible place from within
And when evil begins pursuit,
all you have to do is believe!!!!
Close your eyes and believe......
There's a special place we can go
It's a explorable place of dreams
And a wonderment beyond belief
It's somewhere few will seek
And virtue will supercede all evil.
Please tell me what you think
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So true sweety
We all have that special place to just sit and think of our life's. I have one and to some it seems weird but to me its a place to remember wonderful memories and a place to just think of lifes little joys and sorrows. Things that we only share with our selfs. Thank you for sharing you special place. Your Ap Mom Lisa


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Everyone has their place...if they can find it. Glad to see some of us still have that place in their heart...
I liked the repetition of it...a wonderful piece to be sure!

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Hose, this is incredible! I also wanted to ask, are the graphics your's as well?
This is a wondeerful uplifting poem. I would like to print it and keep in my desk to read if I ever get too stressed out.

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Wow great job brother

I haven't read anything from you in a while I liked this piece!!






