You tell me how much you love me
I whisper how much that I love you
As precious as these words are to me
They echo in my heart...
You beg to hold me in your arms
as I play with the telephone wire
staring into the darkness of my bedroom
There is a yearning in your voice...
I am at a loss for words in this particular conversation
As I listen to the relaxing sound of your soft voice
Theres something heavy weighing on my mind
A secret Ive kept for months that feel like years...
You see...
I didnt know we would come this far
to quietly arrive at love's doorstep
I didnt realize every day we were getting closer
we were falling deeper into this something
we call Love...
How do i tell you, Im not who you think I am
I cant break your heart into pieces with the truth
The fact that im alreadys someones wife
even though, we have talked about Our life together...
How can life be so cruel to a young heart
how can I love two men ?
How can my Heart be in 2 different places?
So agonizing, this web of lies I have created...
I feel like Im walking through the fire of my love
I feel as though my common sence is clouded
With this fierce burning new love I have found
I cant have both & I cant continue living a lie...
I hear you asking me to speak my mind to you
But How can I break a heart I have fallen in love with?
how can I hurt you with the truth of who I am
I cant continue this lie as you continously fall deeper...
I Love You...
Believe me when I tell you those 3 words
each one rings true
...from my deepest part of my heart
So, as I listen to you breathe on the other end of this phone line
My heart aches with a burning desire for you , my Love
I wipe the tears from my eyes and Tell you that I love you
as I hang up the phone...
I lay here in the darkness of my bedroom
And I wait for my husband to come home from work....
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omgggg i havent seen a piece from you in sooooooo long. but this is AWESOME i love it!! soooo much emotion in this im surprised. you did great mami lmao. Dont forget to return the love
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written more like a story than a poem I'd say. condense this more!
"hold me in your arms" cliche alert!
im => i'm. Our => our. less ellipsis (...).
very intense! a lovely piece with a lot of potential, good luck -
wow so much emotion, passion. i really enjoyed this write. A woman in love with two men, so heartwrenching to think that you love them both, and at some point you have to pick one. I cant imagine how it would feel to be in this situation, but i guess it would be very hard. I loved the flow of this and the fact it didn't rhyme seemed to make it all the better, it was well written, vocabulary was good. well done, i loved it!!!!!
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"How can I break a heart I have fallen in love with?" Good line. I like this a lot but it needs a bit more proofing of grammar and spelling.
"I lay here" - should be "I lie here"
"sence" - should be "sense"
Check it over again, that's my advice. But I enjoyed it and thought it a good write.
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Difficult decisions. Eventually the truth come out. As people say you can't have your cake and eat it too. Now why was that ever a phrase? Still people are going to feel pain. Jesus told us to love but who would have thought that love can be painful? A well written poem.
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nice
wow.... what a sad poem. I've been on the other end of that situation before so i can really relate.
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this is sad! [GBS] i know the intensity of these emotions, and you place them well on the page. there's this sorrow and reality of knowing that love has no boundaries but must have restrictions, especially when one is betrothed to another in the eyes of God. i do hope that the one this poem is intended for reads, and understands. there are many perplexities in love. there is a way to get honey from that which is of spoil. the very evidence of your pain is proof enough that your intent is not to hurt either person. be brave and know that mending is in effect right now. [ILT] in all it's sincerity! i wish you well. i wish you happiness and contentment, great peace...
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