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Today

Today we argued
Today you made me cry
Today you said you loved me
If I leave then you would die.
Today you said you’re sorry
Today my bruises show
Today I made a promise
That tomorrow I would go
Today my heart was broken
Today I packed my case
Today you cried and shouted
And smacked me in the face.

Yesterday was easy
Yesterday went fast
Yesterday I left you
I feel free at last.

Author notes

I know the ending is a little weak. Mum and I were discussing domestic violence and I felt inspired....I dunno I just wrote.

Any comments/constructive criticism is appreciated.

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