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something I wrote after a long drought - doesn't have a title yet

Teasing;

life contorts ability

...to
simply

make sense...

Playing cards fall fast
slicing and dicing
emotions;
once were brave

finally, now
she surpresses no longer
the pulsating pains ready to burst.

Today skies punish in black,
wicked winds
taunt crazy out to play

with a crack of light
temptations are tasted

and she is no more;
herself.

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whatever you say, just dont beat it up, i havent written in a long time and recently it started coming again

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  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    July 31

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    There is a release of kinds to this piece, or a feeling of not having to play a part in who she isn't for other people. Beautifully done. best to you poet


  • mato
    July 29
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    This is fantastic.

    I really enjoyed this. In a weird way, I think I understand it.

  • No need to beat it up cause it's fab sis!! Love the abstract feel to this.. and the sense of release. Sometimes it's great not to be yourself anymore...