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How it ends

Time just stopped.
You said you had to talk.
And now I'm watchin you walk away.
The words set in with each step you take.

Please come back and hold me.
Tell me that you've always loved me.
Can't I just be dreaming.
How can you just leave me.
My heart has stopped beating.
You stole the life in me.

How can you expect me to move on.
We have been together for so long.
You were my other half.
Why can't it just ever last.

Please come back and hold me.

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  • individuality gold member
    July 30

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    a good piece, ah love, it steals our hearts all of the time, all we can eer do really is writhe on love's palm as she twists us into crazy shapes of life, such is the way of the world, of humanity dominated by the need to love.