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We Danced in the Moons Glow (ded: Cricketjeff)

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In a dream we kissed the stars in hand

as the clouds separated on demand

Waistcoat of tea pots had slipped to the floor

and we danced in the Moons glow once more

 

Spiraling around your head on shoulder

a heart battered and you had consoled her

Eyes twinkle in the one you adore

and we danced in the Moons glow once more

 

Squeezing and teasing you then kiss my nose

on my lips you placed a few of those

Drawing me closer we brushed loves shore

and we danced in the Moons glow once more

 

In a dream we kissed the stars in hand

and we danced in the Moons glow once more

 

 

 

Author notes

This is a dedication for my Sweetest Love, Cricketjeff, My King of Rhyme.
Nothing can be said I havent said before so I will just skip the introductions of all my emotions and hoopla.

Well okay no I wont I love this man with a purple passion...He is a great poet a great friend, I thank you Jeff for all you do..and still do keeping me intact .

Love you always

Tory

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Comments

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  • Griswold
    August 4

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    I see quite a few similarities to poems jeff has written in this one. Well done... Love you... Scott


  • cricketjeff gold member
    July 31

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    I don't think I can comment save to say thank-you

    It's a beautiful poem

    Jeff


  • Jade.Butterfly gold member
    July 30

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    Oh nice vivid imagery you have here!
    Ahh we danced in the moons glow
    what a beautiful sentiment
    I would love to do that as i have never done it,
    I really enjoyed yourds words here such beauty!
    Good luck
    -Mandi


  • glenn shannon silver member
    July 30

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    thats a beautiful ded to youre cricket jeff i know hes a damn good guy and always there for u and no doubt he wil be humbled by this open lovely poem well done


  • princessleejwctlvr2
    July 29
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    Aww ur words are so sweet like honey and so truly truly beautiful my dear sweet sis I love this piece!!!


  • DolceVito gold member
    July 29
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    Wonderful dedication, Passionate One; I'm sure Cricketjeff will love it as well


  • hisaddiction
    July 29
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    you're so lovely. I think any man should be honored to have beautiful words written for them by you.


    • PassionsPromise gold member
      July 29
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      thank you hisaddition..i love Jeff, hes always been there, even with my faults hell even with his, we faced it and moved on..I lost my strength..

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