Hey don't you hang up
I have a few things to say
Hey don't you wait up on me
I been waiting all fucking day
So just let me be
So I can try to think
Hey don't you notice that
I'm not coming back
And maybe I can wait a little more
And maybe you can just tell me what your wanting
Maybe I can understand before...
Hey don't you walk away
From your problems
I tend to do that sometimes
I guess I should of payed attention
But I was to busy worried about the next line
So maybe
Maybe you can show me how to live
And maybe I'll listen this time
Well I can't say that I have had the time
To write to down every line
That I think might be a line worth writing down
But it was so profound
And maybe
You can show me..
And maybe
This lifes worth living
And maybe
Nicotine
It may just be...
Me just speaking out...
Hey before you go
Will you wait up for me
Because you know?
I been waiting
For you to come back
And maybe I'm just tired
I need you here
You need me there
But I'm so inspired here lately
Author notes
Working on the music as I typed this
A contest entry
- Amaze me. by Antebellum.
400 points, ended August 2, 104 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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There's something about your writing.. i can't figure out what it is, but it makes me love it so so so much.
Good job, Joe.
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wow. great job, Joe! =D
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Hey don't you hang up
I have a few things to say
Hey don't you wait up on me
I been waiting all fucking day
I love this part.
I can relate.
thanks for entering. -
Great write love
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thanks
a video of the song is up loading to youtube then it should be able to be played here as well
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