Something special
By ChaingangAngel on July 28th 2009, late at night.
on topic Eyes Filled With Sadness
The look on his face when were heard the words
We could even speak just starting balling
Were told to go back and talk to the doctor
That didnt sound good crying so hard that
we freaked out the others but It didnt matter
cause we lost something so near and dear
Its was almost to good to be true it seemed as
if everything wasnt meant to be.
We still got each other and were trying again
Wish me good luck because I hope my time is here.
I hope it all works out nicely I know I deserve it so dearly.
What did you think
Comments
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You remind me of a very talented poet but your better than her your words are more than words each word seems to have it's own story in this well written poem
I really loved this poem
Keep writing
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