Things between us have changed,
You hide everything from me,
Cover it up as best you can,
Built a wall,
Blocked out the world,
And I know you're hurt,
I can see the pain,
See the broken soul of the angel,
The angel I know you are.
Do you remember when you let me in?
When you told me everything?
Babe,
That's all I'm asking,
Next time when I bring your wall down,
Don't hide from me,
Tell me,
Tell me everything,
I want to know,
To help you,
I don't want you to be lost anymore,
Or to hide,
Don't lie to me,
Don't tell me you are okay,
Tell me you're broken,
You're in pain,
You're dying inside,
Tell me,Love, I'll listen.
Author notes
Fork Issues.....I used a quote from option 2 the quote was number 18)"There was a time when you let me know what was really going on below, but now you never show that to me do you?"-Jeff Bukely-Halleujah
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awww I love the emotion in this write I can relate!
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This poem hit my heart in way I didn't expect....this poem made me think about my love...the only guy I live for alwas hides stuff from me I recently found out the most hurtful thing from him but that's another story...I just wanted to say I understand this poem and I love it...
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Thanks, I'm sorry that your love hurt you. I have been down that road a few times where you think you know someone but it turns out they were the person that they swore they would never be and that because they hid stuff from you, you don't know the real them. I have been the person hiding things from others and sometimes, well alot of the time, I still do. I guess I can see both side of this problem that everyone faces.
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