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A Glitch in Astronomy

I was born a twin. The skies rained on me
Anything but originality and never clarified.
Yet this path of Nature I defy; Hells and Heavens
Cannot conquer me--a zombie fugitive.
I was born a copy
Though I know in truth
My soul is anything but human.

A contest entry

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  • No Quarter
    July 29

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    oh very brilliant indeed. i can't tell what star this is about (lots fit this description) but it still is excellent and well meets the prompt. these lines:
    I was born a twin. The skies rained on me
    Anything but originality and never clarified.
    were my favorites thanks for entering and good luck

  • XxLoverOfDarknessxX
    July 28

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    awesome! LOVED IT! this was really good! WOW! NICELY DONE! keep up the good work! thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!