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Oh Santa,

Dear santa,

I have been very good, my toys I did share
And I only lightly pulled my sisters hair.

I pushed Tommy down
And my mommy did frown

And I colored in my new book
But it's more pretty now, see?  Look.

Than there was the time with the slug
And the big scary bug...

And the mess in the hall
And the incident with the leaves over the fall,

But I did share my toys
Though during nap time I always make noise...

And I did give mommy those flowers
But broke the vase with my super powers...

But I love my mommy, and my Daddy and my sis
So all my 'mistakes' I hope you dismiss.

Because I want a toy truck and a ball and a dog
And a rocket and a plane and another pet frog.

And a ninja turtle and a G.I. Joe and a book about snakes
And one of those ovens where kids can make pizzas and cakes.

And I need more water balloons and a watch and some new running shoes
And a bike and a whole set of fake tattoos.

I have been good this year and so I know that you will
Give me these things that the elves make for me with skill.

Author notes

not quite what you want, but it was begging to be written, this is an improvement on my old poem

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  • thelordreigns gold member
    August 21

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    This is a very cute entry!

    Thanks so much for entering my contest and I truly hope you get ALL your precious heart desires!

    - joanne -


  • penman gold member
    August 8
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    Wonderful

    Oh my what a great write for the theme. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.

  • abu nuwas
    July 29
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    Haha!!!!

    Too much hair, but other than that, v witty.


  • xXGoddessofPainXx
    July 29

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    Omg this is such a cute poem. When I began reading I was wondering why you were writing a letter to santa.. I think it's so sweet and that this kid is hilarious! The things that he does so mischevious!! Santa will have to think about whether he goes on the nice list or the naughty one..

  • mcheadle
    July 28

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    This is a hoot

    Where did this kid get his ideas from. I hope he is on a leash, or has window weights on his shoe strings. Got to love the kid that tries, and tries, and tries...mac does he look like me????????????
    never mind what I look like.

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