A heart beat too fast,
A flicker in time.
You see the light,
You feel the sign.
The night into day,
A minute to an hour.
Soar above the blue sky,
From a bud to a flower.
Listen to the new cries,
So pure with no past.
An innocent face,
In this world at last.
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Written March 27th, 2004
This was the first ever poem I wrote. I was in class, aged 15, bored and it just came to me and my love of poetry was born.
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This was a great interpretation of a childs birth. And i love how in your stanzas state the maturing of the subject. I see the origin of your talent here. Great work.
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This is pretty awesome.
-cheers
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I like the upbeat tempo of this piece...has a great flow & rthym-thank you for your comment on 'Inspiration is' & good luck as well!
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awww...thats really good its really cute too i liek this alot and i adore babies my nefew is almost a year old and i still think hes like the cutest baby ever!!!! this is really beautiful and well written good thing oyu like said what it meant in the uh description o fhte poem or else i would have been lost!
good job
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Yes very cute and yes they are so innocent and then it all goes pear shaped!
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Awww! Very cute. Nice poem. Birth is such a wonderful experience. I love the comparason to the bud turning into a blossom. Great poem, keep writing!
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