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yellowsun or im as yellow as the sun.

i'm yellow as the sun.
But your not here with me.
Your the rays i shine upon the earth.

I'm a small white dove.
But your not here with me.
Your the bug that got away.

I'm the plane in the sky.
But your not here with me.
Your the shadow i cast upon the earth.

I'm a single yellow sun,
I'm a single small white dove,
I'm a single plane in the blue sky.
But i got one thing on my mind.
Maybe just maybe this is all just the wrong way round.

I'm a single yellow sun with no one around me.
I'm a single small white dove with no one around me.
I'm a single plane in the blue sky with no one around me.

I'm a single yellow sun that rays shine upon this beautiful earth.
I'm a single small white dove flying fast after you.
I'm a single lonely plane in this wide, wide, blue sky.

im just some one small in this wide, fast and beautiful world,
and your not here with me.
Your just hanging with those with small dreams.

I'm just some one small with big dreams.
But your not here with me.
Your the some one with small dreams.
But i got on thing on my mind.
Maybe just Maybe i have this all right.


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i finally have finished it.

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  • Gamefreak
    August 29

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    great write

    is this based on something personal. Cause if so you should surround yourself with people who have as big dreams as you do. Love this write cant wait to read more


    • kel dog
      August 29
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      well that gonna be a bit hard to find people whi have big dreams like i do.
      but thatnks for the read.


    • kel dog
      August 29
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      well that gonna be a bit hard to find people whi have big dreams like i do.
      but thatnks for the read.


  • slicedman
    August 3

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    Blue Blue Sky

    I'm as blue as the sky.
    But you are not here with me.
    You are the drops I rain upon the earth.
    I'm the blue blue sky.
    you are the drops I rain upon the earth.

    I'm a single blue jay.
    But you are not here with me.
    You are the seed that hide away.
    I'm a flying blue jay.
    but you are the seed that hide away.

    I'm the shelter for your dream.
    But your not here with me.
    Your are a storm i cast upon the ocean.
    I'm the black magic.
    And you are the wave of me upon the ocean.


    • kel dog
      August 3
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      wow. you done another great write. smarty. ill eat ya haha.
      my poem/lyrics are not finished just yet. i cant figure out what to put next. this one i have to think a loittle more than all the other poems/lyrics i have done. it's a little more improtent to the others.

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