you’re squawking
all dry rubber lips -
barbed accentuation
from talon fingertips.
you’re drip-fed
under ochre veneer
and comb-teased bed-head
-all Novocain cheer.
you’re a filthy little cheat
repeat repeat repeat
you’re a filthy little cheat
repeat.
A contest entry
- 5 days only: ABUSE FROM AP POETS...STEP IN AND SPEAK OUT (of course follow site rules) by PassionsPromise.
1750 points, ended August 2, 19 entries
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you are the clever writer, always. wishi could indulge more often, but you seem to be on a different plane these days. am i squawking? i hope not. hard for a fish, anyway. i like the verve of your writing here, the three stanzas, not all dark, but with a wicked little humor, too. from my perch beneath the waves, take care. -silverfish
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Hey, I DO like this, indeed! Short, pithy and full of spit and vinger... it moves rapidly and delightly and hammers those obtuse nay-sayers who continually rain on the parade, any parade... loved it tone!!!
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sorry i forgot to add my claps
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I love it especially the part where you can hear the bird reapeating parts you wish he didnt't say
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LOL love the repeat.
well said poet thank you and good luck
Passions
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