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Stupid Slut

Stupid slut,
That's all I see.

That's what I am,
That's all I will ever be.

God, so many guy's,
Love is all I am trying to find.

The one you want to fuck,
The one who love left behind.

The one forgotten,
After every fucking drunken night.

The one that you do and then pass on,
Am I right.

I am never good enough.
nothing more than a fucking whore,

I will never find true love,
I'll never be the one you really adore.

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  • Perfect!

    I loved this poem, it has such a rich message. Really goodjob. Two thumbs up.