Don't ask me how I feel
Don't feel how i ache
Don't tell me I'm beautiful
Just fuck me and force my body to shake
I have no desire to climb upon your shore
Unless there's a heated storm
thundering to quake me beneath you
And let the torrent rain cleanse
the raging need to please
as i care not to please you
Just bury my name
As the wind blows the sands
of cherish and forever away
Don't show me your blue eyes
Just play with me
And ask no questions
Allow me my disguise
Then you may sail away
and perhaps you'll tack
by my shores another stormy day
what do you think.
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This is a really good piece. I love how you wrote it. Keep up your amazing work!!!!
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***Blink***
Damn.
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wow
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I like the rawhonesty
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Emotion was dripping from this, very well expressed. Great work!
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i absolutly love it you show all your emotions perfectly within each word
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ah yes...pirate sex (kidding)
very whispy and longingfull. The story of a brief seaside encounter. There is a beauty in honesty...sometimes you want mystery and romance without strings and obligations. Sometimes living is only for fun.
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a good piece, ah life and love and the emotional complexity-darkness inside of our souls, sometimes that is how it is, just use then vanish, for i just do not care anymore, about anything or anyone, including myself.
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This is really amazing. I like it the way it is.
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HOLY SHIT
THAT'S THE BRUTAL EMOTION!
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