S oftly, gently i
C aress your silky hair,
A nd inside my heart skips a beat,
R eally, truly, i am unsteady on my feet,
L ove is what i feel for you, my beautiful child, i love you,
E ven when the times are tough, no matter what we have to overcome,
T ogether we will make it through,
T ogether we will build a life from new.
A contest entry
- What haven't I read yet? by Antebellum.
500 points, ended August 4, 82 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
This is my first attempt at acrostics, i'd like some truthful comments please!!!
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well for your first "attempt" you have nailed it to the wall!! I love it...I only recently posted my first acrostic...One of my comments was a full do over of what I had written...lol I took the hint and revamped it!!
I love the name scarlett! thank you for sharing!!
-Kendal *kendal
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for your first attempt you did
a-m-a-z-i-n-g!
im not to in to this form of poetry but it was SO worth reading,
good work hun :]
-vanna -
I have a thing for acrostics, lol.
This is great.
thanks for taking the time to enter,
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great writing. love the creativity. and i agree with izzy1804 about the anew thing. but other than that, let your child keep inspiring you to write. because your writing is beauiful
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awww
I never seen a name poem like this. It's so creative.
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Oh wow! Really like this, it's really interesting. Just a lil' suggestion for the last line "Together we will build our lives anew." I don't know just a suggestion
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