I don't kiss ass sounds kind of crass
but there you are.
Games are best left to children
kindness given to all.
cliques banished to the back of the room
you think your special when you tag your it
I ll rip that so called Christian Veil right off of you
I think your full of shit
and hold on sister I an't done yet.
people who write about Vietnam and other wars
our military, spew lies with out research,
I do not object to opinions just propaganda
that will send these people to my version of hell
not good poetry ..
sure as hell made me feel better.
Author notes
yes I have never used S-H-I-T before in a rant or poem .. I am cussing more and more on here .. I may need a vacation. I know what a Christian is and I know what standing for yourself is... some people just do not get it.
A contest entry
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Hey. I like this. You are so spicey some times...
I have a piece at Deercatcher called "Transmission" on the nature of communicating. It is kind of a rough outline; see what you think about the "Language of persuation" as reflected in this work of art... -
Propaganda should be a sin that will send those who spew it straight to the pit, "Christian" or not, do not pass go or any of that other shit (oops lol).
Great poem and I couldn't agree more regarding the wars... any of them, but especially the "policing" to which too many of my dear friends are still being victimized by our government; along with the imbeciles that spout their un educated garbage.
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Thank you
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WOnderfully said hon, a vacation we all need from here
well done
good luck
Passions
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calm down kitten
You got this big old dog up a tree, remind me never to tangle with you, I haven't forgotten the boot knife either, you find the little Wilson yet? "Someones gonna get hurt when y'all get yer hackles up don't ya know". And the sh-t word too, daddy's gonna have to wash your mouth out with soap sister. Most of us do get it but those that don't never will...don't waste your time with them hon. As far as 'Nam goes, ya had to be there...nuff said!
Nice rant!
Rick
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Hello Brother, you were too late with the soap.. This kitten took not one prisoner, How I am responsible for another woman "running " away from AP i don't know. I do not fit in very well here. The Barbie dolls cry too easy when you fight back. My world is so different . people play with your mind and honor here. I am using words that are so not nice and I am reading words a woman should never see. a three day ban that was unquestionably called for and oh well Rick oh well. u love me any way brother?
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Tough on the outside sweet in the center, love your spirit little sister, you fit in just fine around here, poets are an eclectic bunch, we range from pansy asses to jack asses but we all got to get along, not saying we have to get along good. The one thing we can't be around here is thin skinned. If someone left it was their choice, not your fault. Sorry to hear you took it on the chin darling. Smart, sweet, long legs, looks as good coming as going and tough as nails, whats not to love.
Cute photo, takes after her grandma.
Chic
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Woof Woof!
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down boy ... I am so mean today and yesterday and... I need to go away fro a while grin.
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Ahh layeek Mah frenz meeen...
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Good (as usual)
Arguing with a mind that has to be crow-barred open can seem pointless but...... it has to be done and you do it well.
Swear and cuss in your sweet southern tea.
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this is why adore you . I can be me and you like it brother.
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wow
I love your fire lady!!! excellent, even with the slight pottymouth! l.o.l. hell if it helps shit , i said too!! l.o.l. seriously a good solid piece of 'speaking your mind'..
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I love you ty
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Being on the wrong side of the pond and having lived through the time of the Vietnam war I somehow don't altogether get this rant but it is absolutely right of you having one or two or three. Let's all rant together and see what we can think of to get people going --heehee.
Have I produced enough words here to satisfy Kevin's new rules? And another heehee!?
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yes darling ( my secret love across the water) you got the and I quote "the coveted 5th star" grining at you shamlessely. You and I could probally with your wit, correct grammer and talent and my, my umm my new use of bad words? Stand this place upon its ear we did it once remember .. ah the good old days.... wait that was only six or seven months ago time flies when you are trying to swat them with a fly swat?
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Just clicked you FIVE!!!
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you think this is a good waste of Kevin's points whisper.. hah we will show him ... lol om my word grin.
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Tellin em how the kitty cat walked the clothesline. I get it from start to finish.
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Thank you brother
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