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The Decayed Butterfly

 
 
 
 
Corpse of a butterfly, so delicate and frail
Dimmed rusted wings and blistered fails
Undergoing four life stages this is now you
Dead, decayed, withered and true

Oh such a sweet and vile end to thee
Preyed upon, stomped upon by creatures like me
Look now where your leftovers remain
Decayed bones and rusted flesh scattered in bane

Egg, Larva, pupa, Imago that was once you
Graceful wings, colours, patterns anew
But now look where thee has met it’s end
Slain and buried in my backyard my friend  
 

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I know I may not be the most excellent poet there is out there, I am trying my best to catch up with the advanced authors, no one is perfect, just like this butterfly.

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  • Not-The-Sun silver member
    August 4

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    this is pretty good Especially if you're only 18 the descriptions are great. the ending is sad, but I feel like the last stanza doesn't really give the author anything new to read about. on the other hand, it's a pretty ironic thing to write about, a beautiful creature, so harmless, and yet nature has placed a death date on it. thank you for entering!

  • First of all cool title it got me interested right away, second of all cool poem, very nice ans sad