home is where the heart is
but my heart just wanders free
it stumbles in the darkness
confused and aimlessly
broken heart
broken home
there's nothing left to say
but maybe my heart will find somewhere
it's happy and will stay
it'll find someone who loves it
and alway's treats it kind
and fill the gap that you had left
when you left my broken heart behind
A contest entry
- Quickie by liquidmindforever.
710 points, ended July 31, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I loved where you took the prompt. I could never of taken the word 'Homeless' and turned it into a poem as good as this. I love the last 2 lines, very well done.
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I had to say "aaaawwwwhh" at the lines
"it'll find someone who loves it
and alway's treats it kind"
those two lines strike so close to home, becasue i think that is what everyone wants! <3 Thank you for letting me read this! it was so good!
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Home is Where the Heart is
home is where the heart is
but my heart just wanders free
it stumbles in the darkness
confused and aimlessly
broken heart
broken home
there's nothing left to say
but maybe my heart will find somewhere
it's happy and will stay
it'll find someone who loves it
and alway's treats it kind
and fill the gap that you had left
when you left my broken heart behind
SORRY I COPIED LIKE EVERYTHING! JUST SHOWING MY AWSOME APPRECIATION FOR ALLPOETRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -
Dear Poet,
Thank you for entering my contest: Quickie, "Homeless."
You've created the arena of emptiness and space.
Wishing you the best
till then
stay
liquid
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lovvvvvvvve it
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