i am drowning peacefully
no air escapes my chest
those gorgeous eyes, that stunning smile
you truly are the best
i'm drowning in your presence
there's not much for me to say
but you, standing next to me
takes my very breath away
A contest entry
- Quick E Contest by Errant Panther.
575 points, ended August 15, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think
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Don't you hate that feeling? The feeling of immense pleasure mixed with ultimate pain. Congrats on the honorable mention, you really deserved it.
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i see why you won a trphy on this it is beautiful! <3 everythign about it is really really good! <3 I'd copy every part as my favorite but then i'd be doing what jasmine does and i'd rather use my typing to tell you that it's just drop dead gorgeous! <3 again wonderful job!
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Breathless
i am drowning peacefully
no air escapes my chest
those gorgeous eyes, that stunning smile
you truly are the best
i'm drowning in your presence
there's not much for me to say
but you, standing next to me
takes my very breath away
A contest entry
Quick E Contest by Errant Panther. 575 points, ended August 15, 8 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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haha wow jazz you even got the hmm. it's avalance... wow that's sad! <3
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heh?
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very romantic in expression but perhaps taking the prompt a tad literally, thanks for entering and best wishes
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Very Cute
I Liked It
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'i'm drowning in your presence'
i like that
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