Build me a dream
filled with unknown memories
of years gone by-
include in it
our wedding,
filled with our love,
include in it,
plans that we made,
hopes that we had,
and a life
where we never lost-
Build me a dream
of unknown memories,
covered in roses
soft and silky-
wrapping it in
tender loving care,
where the unknown-
becomes the known-
where every day-
we grow closer and closer,
walking hand in hand
into tomorrow.
Author notes
For Someone~ I love you
This is inspired by something my Special Someone said to me, about the years
we were apart.
In a list
Please tell me what you think
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How sweet! Very intense. I really felt this poem, whilst enjoying reading it.
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i fell in love with this piece from your very first sentence.
" Build me a dream "
that is so pretty.
you have been on a roll with these beautiful pieces of yours.
keep them coming...
loveandblessings2u & yours always
love you,
your twin
joyce
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Aww, this piece is so lovely!
At first it seemed like a checklist of thoughts, but as it progressed I could see the connection better. Good job with this piece.
Bravo
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AS GOOD AS GOLD TO ME!
This was one of your best as it was so easy to see that it was written from your heart and soul - as all real poetry is if you ask me - and in the same simple, tender, emotional, rhythmic, and loving words that our heart and soul sings to us in - and what can be better, more melodic, and more poetic and golden than that, my dear friend. Good Luck in the contest with this BUt from your authors notes I can tell that you have already won the gold and much more. It seems to me that you have ended one journey - that had it's ups and downs - to embark on a new filled with the hope and promise of realizing many of your lifelong dreams. All the more power to you, Baby!
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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Just amazing hun!
I loved the way you filled this with emotion..
I'm almost positive he will love this.
I enjoyed this read from you.
And 
Mandi
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First 3 lines ..Terrific..What a way to label an emotion..One of your best..Beautifull.He will love this..I do.Thank you for writing this, Sis..Super duper.
John
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Thanks Bubs,
This came from something he said, about how he sees the years we lost, they are nothing but "unknown memories"
That is how I came up with this one...
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Superb
'tis a very fine write, indeed. You expressed your thoughts quite well. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Again, very well done. -
this brings me to both hope and sadness. very nice poem i trust many will relate to.
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I am sure many will relate, but the reasons behind this one, is of a story that has been long in the making, and one that is unfolding as we speak.
Thanks.....
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Oh My Word~
Now this pulls and tugs at the Heartstrings
Beautifully penned Sis~ and what emotions to follow
Love this and I imagine the *someone*
would Love this too
Woot!
Shake it baby shake it
Thank You for sharing Your Voice
Best wishes in all You do
with love & light~ Desire~*~
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beautiful mommy
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