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come unto me

Walk do not run to me
I will await through the seasons
You may contain my essence
Yet I do discriminate

Burning fields of wheat
Starve the bread makers
Kill the passionate
Bury your spite within my flesh

Mistaken their trust
Fell upon this terror
An eternity of lies
Set the nights ablaze

Progression with no water
Too much sunlight
Withering brown from green
Breakdown and return

Goodbye Farewell
Farewell Goodbye

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  • "Mistaken their trust Fell upon this terror An eternity of lies Set the nights ablaze" were my favorite lines in this one. Although I really liked the first two lines in your first stanza as well! Well done


    • sjedju
      July 30
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      Thanks I was in a strange mood when I wrote this