randomized flirtations buzzed
and bounced around your brain
the honeypot and the bees
of course you had magpie eyes
& cocksure wings of a cuckoo
you stole many things from me
including my heart
there is a word for people like you
A contest entry
- tenacity by knock.
400 points, ended August 9, 2 entries
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magpie eyes.... i liked this image the most....
the feeling?
may i never piss you off
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And I have a feeling on what that word is! This was emotional to read and even sad. Thanks for writing this work...enjoyed it Gillian!
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a good poem penned, ah if someone's heart is stolen from them, then it was always open and ready to be taken i reckon, and the beat of it sighs in love's open hand.
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damn, NC. ouchies all around, i see!
a humdinger, this is. outstanding!
betcha didn't expect me round, didja? hehe
x
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I can easily imagine what the word is, too. 
Good luck in the contest, Sweetie. 
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You made my Tuesday even better than it was. I thought it couldn't possibly improve after I got my salad at Subway FOR FREE; apparently I am mistaken. There is such...glee in this poem, for lack of a better word. I'm loving the honey and bees and the magpie and cuckoo
Cracking stuff
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makes me think of the old Spanish saying "if love isn't madness, it isn't love". This one is a mouthful, gilly - no pun intended . Lol, can't say where some of these words took my mind - hehehehe....!
power-packed poem, my friend...love the last line and the many words that i'm seeing and hearing in my mind now!
~ Nicolette
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i think that's so true my dear friend xxxx
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yes
the word is pretentious
lol
ok ok
i overuse it
like the rhyme
like the sweetness
like the open ending
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cunt hahhahahah
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